I found you last winter and I couldn't believe my luck
You caught my eye when I came in the store
Your color was so beautiful as if you had surpass those of the rainbow
Your texture, so smooth that I feared one touch might ruin you
I knew that having you would make other men envious of me
I knew that having you would make this merciless winter feel so warm
If I had you, I would treasure you and take the best of care of you
I'd see to it that no harm came to you
Under my care you would continue to be a true master piece
Because something like you is hard to find
But alas you cost $825.99 and I'd be damned if I paid that much for a coat
This is a funny poem. It seem as if its talking about a beautiful women and its actually about a coat. Made me laugh. You should write more like this one, very good.
ReplyDeleteI love the quick turn around at the end of this poem it's a nice clean cut to comedy which is very cool. Made it that much more enjoyable.
ReplyDeleteI don't like the rainbow comparison. There are more colors in life to compare it to a rainbow. I felt it's easy for anything to have better colors than in a rainbow, making it a simple comment.
ReplyDeleteAnd it's no surprise. People aren't the only beautiful things.